i love you so much but you make me so crazy maybe it's just my jealousy but i don't know if i wanna deal with this all over again. maybe i could try and change but it's so hard to do this is the way i am i don't know what to do i just wanna feel the way i do when it's me and you without a care without anyone else there.... |
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but i don't know if i wanna
deal with this all over again.
closeing 2 lines are good thought
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- StarFour ( Steve )
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*Biblical choirs soar beyond veiled light, a swansong for ravens traped flapping in night*
( And hell knows we sought victory )
yeah i agree with steve...i think for ur next poem just think about ur spacing and how u format it
if u put two things on seperate lines it should be for a reason..usually because u want the reader to pause or stop..sooo just keep that in mind cuz sometimes if the spacing is off ...the timing is off..and it distracts the reader..i dono if that makes sense but yea!
very good..i like how u expressed ur feeling
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Another scene that we're creating,
I need to know if we're still making useless progress.
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create something good and you have sunshine... feel sunshine and you find love... if you have love you have infinity
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